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Media: Poster

Purpose: Awareness

Језик: English

Derivative: Ubuntu

Release: 10.10 Maverick Meerkat

Reworked the Ubuntu-UK "Your Free Alternative" piece so it can print on standard 8.5 x 11 inch paper (USA). Added a promotional "created in Ubuntu Studio" mark.

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Creative Commons License "Ubuntu Tabbed Tearsheet" by cfhowlett is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 License.
Originally based on a work by Charles Howlett

Ideas

Submitted by su on June 16, 2010 - 00:54.

I like it.

The first paragraph seems like it could be condensed a little.

The most valuable one to me is the middle one.

I'm not sure OSX needs to be mentioned in the "difficult?" paragraph. I'm just thinking maybe saying "alongside your existing system" might be a little more what you want the reader to know.

I'm not convinced those are the best screenshots. It seems a little busy and small.
Maybe consider some cropping - especially with the office suite one.
For the middle one, if you want to demo the applications - why not get rid of the desktop? just layer the windows themselves.
I think it might be worth highlighting Firefox to get some familiarity in there.

Maybe put the second line in the box at the top.

Maybe take "look into ubuntu" and put it at the bottom where the gap between tearoffs is.